I thought I would share my paragraph with you. It doesn't really make sense and the language/wording is really simple... but it was supposed to be creative. I try.
Here 'tis:
There is a tall, skinny house. Many people live in this house. There are green plants all over the house. There are no stairs in, only a rickety, gold elevator. On the first floor, there is a round swimming pool. A girl wearing a pink bathing suit is diving into it. A boy with bright, orange hair is eating purple carrots (Macy, Samantha) in the kitchen. On the second floor, there is a unicorn with a curly fro. (It's pink in my drawing.) On the third floor, an old man is sleeping in a repulsive bed. On the fourth floor, a rich woman is wearing an elegant dress. The sun is shining outside.
It's actually pretty bad. I wanted to rewrite it but figured I didn't have time since it's kind of due tomorrow...oh well.
1 comment:
Oooooh! Sounds fancy! I would like to live in a house with a pink unicorn! He should be named Atlas!
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